Rough Cut

Above is the first rough cut we have produced, the feedback has mainly been criticism of the wind blocking the actual speech in the video and also how some shots need to be edited as it doesn't flow as well as we hoped. Also we need to put music in the video to help create the tension and suspense that we want. Furthermore, we may need to dub over the speech as the wind makes it muffled and quiet, ultimately making it hard to understand.